The First Assertion

All about life and the first voice of redemption.

Who does care?

There are times, when my heart ponders

My mind wants to fly, roam and wander

But the chains of world, oh these limitations

I am confined to these, seeking for liberation

Suffocating in this artificial world

I sometimes feel like a caged bird

All around there are sinful humans

There are many things to give me tensions

No one, but my friends count for this despair

What are my feelings, who does care?


7 comments on “Who does care?

  1. 4valentines4words4poetry4you
    January 11, 2012

    a truelly beautiful piece of poetry

  2. thefirstassertion
    January 11, 2012

    Thank you so much for your feedback.

  3. Anonymous
    January 13, 2012

    Nice work…Who Does care??

  4. Prtyush
    January 13, 2012

    Good work ..!!! 🙂

  5. thefirstassertion
    January 13, 2012

    Thanks Pratyush 🙂

  6. josephine
    January 17, 2012

    love your poem…very straghtforward and nice. But I’m sure you know who does really care for you in this chaotic and sinful world: JESUS.

  7. thefirstassertion
    January 17, 2012

    Completely agree with you. God, Jesus, Allah, whatever we call him. He is indeed the supreme one who takes care of all of us.

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