There are times, when my heart ponders
My mind wants to fly, roam and wander
But the chains of world, oh these limitations
I am confined to these, seeking for liberation
Suffocating in this artificial world
I sometimes feel like a caged bird
All around there are sinful humans
There are many things to give me tensions
No one, but my friends count for this despair
What are my feelings, who does care?
a truelly beautiful piece of poetry
Thank you so much for your feedback.
Nice work…Who Does care??
Good work ..!!! 🙂
Thanks Pratyush 🙂
love your poem…very straghtforward and nice. But I’m sure you know who does really care for you in this chaotic and sinful world: JESUS.
Completely agree with you. God, Jesus, Allah, whatever we call him. He is indeed the supreme one who takes care of all of us.